Writing
Genre
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Suggested
Writing Prompt
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Letter
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Write a letter to…
-Cupid
-A friend
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Persuasive
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Abraham Lincoln or George Washington? Who was the better president, and why?
Is it good or bad when the groundhog sees his
shadow?
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Personal
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Write about a time you gave or received a
Valentine
Write about a great day with your best friend
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Imaginative
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Imagine that you met Punxsutawney Phil (the
groundhog) in Pennsylvania. What
happened?
What would happen if Cupid accidentally shot you
with one of his arrows?
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Clarification
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How to make a Valentine card
Write about the truths and misconceptions
surrounding Valentine’s Day
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Our mission at Queens Creek Elementary is to foster 21st Century-ready students that can effectively clarify, create, and support ideas and ideals by authoring digital writings. Our belief is that this academic enrichment opportunity provides parents, students, and teachers a digital space to share and learn author's craft. For parent, teacher, and community submissions of ORIGINAL works, please send your Microsoft Word Documents to swansboroteach@gmail.com.
Friday, January 30, 2015
February Writing Prompts
Love is in the air! It's important to show our friends and family how much we care about them all year long, but there's just something about February that makes it even more special. There's also a lot of writing around...Valentine cards, love poems, and even the ingredients on the back of your box of chocolates!
Thursday, January 29, 2015
Raindrop Story
By: William, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
“Oh, hi there.”
“My name is JohnnyMcMolecule.” “The story I’m about to tell you is quite
long, so get comfortable.” “It all started when I was just a little molecule.”
SPLASH SPLOSH all day long, a puddle in London, it was as wet as the ocean.
“Mother?” I asked. “Yes dear?” Mother replied. “Do we have to stay here all the
time?” I question. “No, today we have a surprise for you.” She answers.
“Really!?” I say excitedly. “Yes.” Mother reassuringly. *But what I did not
know was that something very crazy was about to happen.*
“Aaaaaaahhhh!” “Why am I turning invisible!?” I yell in fear. “Calm
down.” Mother says. “We’re evaporating.” “Why did we do something wrong!?” I
ask fearfully. “No, it’s because of the
sun’s heat.” “and soon we are going to turn into clouds.” Mother explained.
“Oooohh….well all I want to know is why is it so cold?” I replied. “Well since
water vapor rises quickly we are really high in the atmosphere.” “Ah! Whoa we
are high!” I exclaimed. *A few minutes later other molecules started condensing
and formed a cloud with us.* “Yes a Cumulus cloud my favorite one!” I yell. It
had been 5 months since Johnny and his mother left London and now they were in
a Cumulonimbus cloud and were ready to drop!
“Here we goooo......!” I scream as I fall out of the
cloud. “Wait….this isn’t London…OH NOOOO….!” I yell still falling to Earth. *A
moment later I slid down a long road hitting a building every time I tried to
move, eventually I fell into a drain where I found a paper called “New York
Times”.
Luckily my mother and a few others fell into the
same drain. “Mother? Is this place called “New York”? “Yes.” She replied. “Oh
and I have another question.” I say. “Why did we not land back in London?”
“Well the 5 months we were in that cloud the wind pushed the cloud here.”
Mother explained. *And that’s how I got here to tell you my story, and luckily
it was short enough for us not to evaporate….oh! it’s happening again LETS GO!
Yet again evaporating into the atmosphere Johnny and
his mother wait to form a cloud with other molecules, and when they did form a
cloud it was a Stratus cloud. “Wow!” I say in astonishment. “This cloud looks
big enough to cover an one mile radius!” and again they start their journey. It
hadn’t been long since they left and were now in a Nimbostratus cloud. This time before Johnny and his mother dropped they found themselves in a hurricane somewhere in California. The wind threw them around so much that they were separated and somehow found each other again * I am still trying to figure out how though.* But not long after they landed they were swept away by a flood wave that ran rampid through the streets. A day later they started to evaporate again wondering what was coming next. This time had formed another cumulus cloud, and as always they would soon be a Cumulonimbus cloud. After 7 months of waiting they finally formed a Cumulonimbus cloud and were going to drop in a few minutes. Also during the 7 months went by Johnny made some new friends, their names were Harry Hailstone, Sean Sleet and Jerry Snow. They also had family with them, so my mother finally had someone to talk to. After a little bit they dropped into New York yet again. And while they were falling into New York they all made an incredible encounter! It was Godzilla!! He was acting in the 2014 version of Godzilla. “HI GODZILLA!!!!!” The 4 boys yell at the same time. “HELLO!!” Godzilla roars back. “CUT! Godzilla who are you talking to?” The director asked. “Myself.” Godzilla replied. “Ooops…” Say the 4 boys. “Wow! That was amazing to see a famous actor!” Johnny says to his friends. Just a few seconds later they can see all sorts of props flying around for the movie. “Wow….. I actually feel like I’m in a movie right now!” I yell. Eventually they all fell into a drain and kept talking and talking about how good the new Godzilla movie was going to be. They even thought that they might to get to see themselves in the movie! They thought this because well….. before they fell into the drain Godzilla was on the same path they were. That night minutes before they evaporated out of the movie scene Johnny made a wish that next time they turned into a type of precipitation they all got to meet another movie actor.
Raindrop Story
By: Skyler, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
“Huh?” “What’s going on?” “I didn’t do anything
bad!” I complained. “What happened to just drifting softly?” I used to be a
cloud, now I am falling into what looks like someone’s rain barrel. I look to
see if I can find a familiar face. “John!” I yell. He is my best friend. To me
he is as nice as a flower. “Crystal!” He screams. That is me, Crystal.
“What’s
happening?” I asked him. “We are in the water cycle.” He stated. “Um, what’s
that?” I questioned. I started getting nervous, I have never heard of that. “Precipitation,
condensation, evaporation, any of that ring a bell?” Those last statements
really helped calm me down. I think to myself for a while. “Are we supposed to
fall instantly? That is what we did. Since we are falling as rain, does that
mean we are precipitation? You told me that once.” “Yes I do remember telling
you that and you are correct, we are precipitation.” He tells me. After a long
while of falling, we land on a mountain that Humans call “Mount Everest.” I hit
the ground, hard. All of a sudden all the air in me is taken out. I gasp for
air, I finally manage to talk to John. “John, what’s happening?” I shouted.
“It’s okay, we are runoff. That is one of the best stages.”
“What is
runoff?” I mutter. I am getting old of this whole, water cycle thing.” It is
where we wait to be collected by an ocean, river, or lake.” He responded. “I
don’t understand why we have to go through all these stages and can’t just stay
in one all our lives.” I complain. “If we didn’t go through these stages,
eventually water in the ocean would be gone and that would not be good.” He
replied. “Humans have to drink and if they can’t drink then there won’t be any
left.” He explained. “I will tell you everything you need to know about each
stage as we go through them.” He told me.
“What are
we doing now?” I question. We have been in this pond for quite a while. I
wonder why he hasn’t told me anything yet because… My sentence trails off as I
see something. “Ahhh!” I scream as I see John start rising into the atmosphere
and disappearing. “Oh yes, the same thing is happening to you as well. It is
evaporation. We get so hot we turn into a gas called water vapor.” He states.
“Is that when we are clouds? I love being a cloud!” I scream. I wonder if we
are going to be a cloud soon. It was really hot when we started rising, then it
became colder and colder and colder.
Like John
said, I am most familiar with this stage. If you don’t remember at the
beginning of the story I asked,” What happened to just drifting softly?” Once
you rise higher into the atmosphere it gets colder and colder. You turn into
one of the three types of clouds, Cirrus, Stratus or Cumulous clouds. John
interrupts my though process. “You have been really quite lately, why?” “It is
really cold and after going through all of these stages, I got used to it. Plus
you calmed me down when you said we would become clouds again.” I replied. “Oh”
He murmured. So I am back to being a cloud and drifting softly. I am glad to be
back. I needed a rest from all that.
And now we start over and over through the
water cycle. Like a game that never ends. That was my story. If you were
wondering, yes this is what all water goes through. It is how the Earth
recycles water. Well got to get back to falling. Hoped you learned from my
story. Bye…
Raindrop Story
By: Shellby, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
“My friends and I were just lying on the surface of
the aqua blue Atlantic Ocean when we heard a splat and then another than
another. The sounds were as loud as claps of thunder! And the next thing we
knew we were floating in the air like a flock of birds.”
“I have
just realized we are in evaporation. Evaporation is when runoff turns into
water vapor or as we call it gas. “I feel like I’m flying I said to myself.” “I
know it feels weird!” replied Drippy. “It’s getting cold up here in the
atmosphere.” I admitted. “Yeah it’s as cold as an ice cube up here!” stated
Marshall. All of a sudden I attracted to a piece of dirt or as Marshall Calls
it a “Particle’. I don’t know how I got
up here but I’m about to find out!” I
know what cycle we are in!” yelled Marshall. “Well… What cycle are we in?!” we
all shouted back. “We are in the water cycle!” exclaimed Marshall. Yay! We all
cheered. We are safe!”
“The next morning we all woke up, I looked down at
my “legs.” They weren’t water anymore they were ice crystals or as we know it
snowflakes! Then we dropped. “Aaahhh!” We all yelled in harmony. But then I
glided softly to the ground. “What cycle was that?” I asked Marshall. “Precipitation”
he said. Precipitation is when rain,snow,sleet or hail falls to the surface of
the earth. “Wow that was amazing I wonder what the next stage will be like!
“ Oww! I
complained as I lay on the point of a big smoky gray rock. “That hurt!” I am
now a raindrop again not a snowflake. Marshall?.. Drippy?.. Are you on this big
pointy rock too? I asked. “No” they answered back.” We are down here!” I looked
down oh great now I’m slipping! “It’s okay” Marshall said. In a few minutes we
will turn into runoff with the other raindrops! We will end up back in the
Atlantic Ocean. But we won’t be on the coast of Florida anymore we will be on
the coast of Africa! I guess we will meet new friends! We all said in
excitement. A quick little drizzle of rain came in those few minutes and of
course more raindrops came and then we all slid into the Atlantic Ocean like
people on a water slide! Something was different though… Somebody was missing I
knew it wasn’t Drippy because he was right next to me. Marshall I called out he
didn’t answer Drippy Marshall is gone! We will probably never see him again!
Unless we meet again in the next cycle. Well I hoped and so did Drippy.”
“We lay there on the see through Atlantic Ocean
without Marshall. ’Wait… Drippy do you hear that? “Yeah I did!” he replied
back. Marshall is that you?
We screamed. “Yes it is me!” he yelled back.” We are north of you!” we
screamed. “Come over here!” “Okay on my way!” yelled. Then it happened the cycle started over. “I
wonder if this is going to be our whole life?” I said to Drippy.” Well you
better enjoy it while you can!” he replied.
And then the cycle
started over and over and over and we landed in new places every time! It was
an amazing adventure! You should try it out some time soon!
Raindrop Story
By: Rachel, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
Whoosh! I just flew
through the sky. Bam! Ouch!
“I’m sorry, it’s not my fault the wind made me blow into you”, I
exclaimed. “I’m sorry I screamed at you,
Rachel”, confessed Jessie. “Wow, today
the air up here above Hawaii is as blue as a sapphire!” remarked Jessie. “I know, and the grass looks as green as an
emerald”, I claimed.
“OMG!” I
exclaimed. “What!?” shouted Jessie. “I-I-I’m turning into a-a-a liquid!” I
replied. “Wow, look I am too!” remarked
Jessie. “I wonder why we are doing
this?” I mumbled. “I can’t believe you
guys”, said Kelsey,” you should know that there is a water cycle and this is
the precipitation stage.” “ Oh, that makes sense because I just realized that
because it got warmer our clouds started to melt and now we are raindrops”,
declared Jessie. “Yeah that is
understandable I guess!” I announced. “We are also falling through the
atmosphere, and our clouds did not melt, they became less dense.” Reported
Kelsey. Kerplunk! I just hit the Earth’s
surface at top speed! Ouch! Ow! “Ow, that really hurt!” I
complained. “I know, I totally agree!”
agreed Jessie. “Jeez, you guys are such
big babies, get used to it, sometimes the water cycle hurts!” retorted Kelsey.
“I believe I can fly!” I exclaimed. Oh yeah, I’m all alone. I feel the air outside again. Will I ever find Kelsey or Jessie in this weather? “Rachel!!” someone screamed. “Yes?” I replied. “It’s me, Jessie!” Jessie claimed. “Jessie!” I screamed. “I can’t see you!” Jessie complained. “I know, I think it’s because we got released out of the leaves of the plant, so now we are floating up into the atmosphere.” I explained. “We are in evaporation, and most of the people up here got heated up in a body of water and now we are floating upwards.” Someone reported. “KELSEY!!” Jessie and I screamed. “I know, I know you thought you would never find me.” Kelsey muttered. “Brr…it’s starting to get kind of cold up here.” I grumbled. “Yeah, it is!” Jessie agreed.
“Brr... it’s getting even colder up here!” I exclaimed. “Yeah, and it’s very humid up here.” Jessie said. Then we started to turn into a water droplet and clump together. “I think this is a cumulus cloud.” I explained. “Yeah, me to because we are also in the
Troposphere.” Jessie agreed.
“Yes, you are both right. A cloud forms when water vapor turns into
water and then the water molecules all clump together and form a cloud.”
explained Kelsey. “Okay then, so smarty
what is this stage in the water cycle called?” I questioned. “This is condensation because we condensed
into a cloud.” reported Kelsey.
“I feel as graceful as a swan, just floating all around.” announced Jessie. “Yes it is very relaxing up here, just don’t look down!” I replied. All of a sudden it started getting very warm up in the clouds. “Oh no! We are starting to fall as rain again!” I groaned. Then we started falling. “Wait we aren’t rain this time we are like, slush?” I questioned. “Yes, we are falling as sleet though. There are 4 types of precipitation we can fall as- rain, snow, sleet, or hail.” Kelsey reported. “That is very fascinating.” I replied. So then our journey started again.
Rain Drop Story
By: Peyton, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
Hello my name is Peyton Sparks. I’m a water particle
in Little Pigeon River in the Appalachian Mountains in North Carolina. I live
in the river with my friends Andrew, Jacob, Juan, Autum, Jaedyn, Ross, Skyler, Eric,
Kortney, and Josalynn. The stream is as clear as glass. Now this is my story of
how I went through my first water cycle.
So as I told you I live in a stream. It started
raining hard the water was getting higher and higher. This has never happened
before I felt petrified as all of this was going on right in front of my eyes.
I looked at my friends they too looked frightened. Then I started getting
tossed and turned through the rapid water. The scenery was flying past me.
“Guys what’s happening! “yelled Skyler at the top of her lungs. “I don’t know
but this is scary! “yelled Jacob who was now panicking. “Roller coaster ride”
screamed Andrew raising his hands in the air. I looked around at the scenery.
There was really tall things in the sky but they weren’t trees. They were shiny
too. There were people too, but I have never seen so many in one place before.
I wondered “Why were there so many in one place also what were those really
tall shiny things? “. There was a rock in the middle of us and when we hit it
the water between me and my friends got hit. When it did I got blasted back I
landed in a random puddle. “Guys where are you!“ I called it was night now I
looked around. I just realized I was all alone.
I
started panicking. I looked around even more hoping to find a trace of my
missing friends. Suddenly I heard a voice say “Hello Dear are you okay?” the
voice asked ever so calmly. I spun around to confront the voice I met face to
face with a man that had brown hair and blue eyes “Who are you? “ I inquired the man “I’m John and you are?” he
said replying to me “I’m Peyton.” I said. “Well Peyton I see you just started
up your first water cycle and before you ask yes I’m going to tell you what the
water cycle is and teach you about all the different phases of it.” He then
started laughing at my expression which at the moment was confusion. Once he
stopped laughing he then started to tell me about it all. “The stage you just
went through was run-off next is evaporation.” He explained. “What’s that?” I
asked “That is when the suns heat shines down on us and we become water vapor.”
He explained to me. “What’s water vapor?” I asked. “Water vapor is a type of
gas.” He answered. “Look!” he exclaimed. “It’s happening right now!” Suddenly I
felt as light as a feather. I looked down my feet were gone! Instead replacing
them was a wisp like you see on a ghost. “Is this normal!?” I yelled at John
“Yup.” He said smiling as him and I started floating into the air. “Wow.” I thought “Where are we
now?” I asked still looking around amazed by everything I was seeing. “Were in
the atmosphere.” He said answering my question. I already knew what the
atmosphere was so I didn’t ask about that. “What’s going to happen now?” I
asked “Or do we stay here forever?” “No that doesn’t happen the next thing that
happens in the water cycle is condensation.” He explained “So what is
condensation?” I asked “Condensation is when all the raindrops that got
evaporated all come together and because it gets colder here the farther you go
up we clump together and become this thing called a cloud.” He explained to me.
“Okay.” I paused then asked another question. “So when will it start?” “Soon”
he answered. “I can’t wait.” I thought as John and I were still floating
through the atmosphere.
When
it started getting cold John and I were shaking really bad. We saw some other
water vapor shaking like us from the cold. I looked around in that group of
water vapor still no sign of my friends. More water vapor started getting
closer to us and as John said we all started piling up together. Then we all
started floating together. There were white fluffy walls that acted like a
barricade keeping us all inside. I was getting warmer until I was sweating. “I
don’t like this at all!” I exclaimed miserably. “It’s not my favorite part of
the water cycle either for most water vapor it isn’t. He mumbled. I looked down
to see my wisp but I had feet and legs again. “Oh no!” he basically whispered.
He was looking down at his legs and feet with a look a of fear on his face.
“What!?” I asked. “We are water particles again and soon will be in a phase of
the water cycle that as worse as this it is horrible!” he groaned. “What is
it?” I asked. “Precipitation” he said with that look of fear still engraved on
his face.
“Precipitation?” I asked concern on
what this phase of the water cycle was all about. John still had the look of
fear on his face as he explained to me what precipitation was. “Precipitation
is when the cloud were in gets heavy and we fall out of it because we all aren’t
the weightless water vapor we used to be we are now water particles and when we
fall out of the sky there are 4 different type of precipitation we could fall
out of as . There is hail, rain, sleet and snow.” “Oh.” I said those were the
only words I could muster at the moment. Then suddenly fear started to creep
into my heart like a thief in the dead of the night. I, Peyton Sparks was going
to fall out of the sky, yay. It was a little bit that we waited for it to
happen but it happened so quickly all I heard was BOOM!!!!! And John and I were
free- falling through the sky. I, obviously started screaming my head off. Then
I heard a SPLAT!!! And some sudden pain but it went away quickly. John and I
had landed in a river, my river. We had landed in Little Pigeon River, yes home
sweet home. Then I felt a hand on my
shoulder while John went exploring, my friends “Guys!!!” I accidently screamed
in their faces. “Okay then.” Jacob said trying to dismiss the fact that I had
screamed in their faces. Eric then screamed in my face for revenge I suppose.
But it didn’t matter I was back home with my friends.
So yeah it has been two weeks since
we have been home done with the water cycle. John says in a couple more days
the water cycle will happen again for us. But I really don’t care because I’m
enjoying the fact that I’m home with my friends. So that was my story of my
first water cycle. It really isn’t that scary when you know about. Maybe just
maybe I’ll make another story. Anyway I’m off
to prepare for my next water cycle. I want to bring some comforts with
me on my next water cycle it will make it more enjoyable, Goodbye now my dear
reader of my story.
A Real Rain Drop Story
By: Nathan, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
‘’Ahhhhhhhhhhhh’’ I scream, I’m falling to my death
like a pebble off a cliff .I don’t know how all this started but my names
Spark. I’m always getting into situations but not this bad. I keep falling
faster and faster screaming for my life. Before I hit a mountain my whole life
flashes before me. I guess while stuck in space and time I may as well tell you
how this all started. ‘’What did I do to deserve this? ‘’but then I hear a
crash!
‘’Ahhhh
this is the life.’’ I say floating on a bubble in the Atlantic
Ocean . The sky is dim the ocean is warm and I’m with my friends
and family.’’ I’m going home.’’ I tell
everyone ‘’See you later Spark and don’t get caught by precipitation!’’ teases
Joey he is always telling steam or ghost tales about a curse called
precipitation. It makes you disappear and fly away. I wonder if I should swim
or take a fish or take a fish when suddenly my hand disappears. ’’Huh’’ I
wonder when my arm disappears!
After I lose
my arm to I don’t even know what I start to panic! ’’Help me!’’ I scream
running around in circles. Then I start to feel woozy the last thing I remember
is my arms and legs vanishing. ‘’Ahhhhhh mom I had the most crazy nightmare ‘’
I hear no reply. ‘’Mom?’ ‘’Nihow!’’ I hear someone say then I see a young
Chinese raindrop. ’’Hello where am I ?’’ I ask. ‘’You are in evaporation’’ she
replied in her best English. then I look up and see a big grey Cumulonimbus
cloud.
As I keep
floating upwards I notice two things: I am just a head and the air up in the
atmosphere is cold! The Chinese raindrop has left and I am sick from tossing
and turning. I feel like I’m about to freeze when I hear someone call my name.
“Spark over here!’’. When I turn around I see a big zigzag cirrus cloud and in
it is my old buddy frosty! I float over and talk with him. Frosty is a ice
crystal with bright eyes and a big smile. ”Frosty where are we!?”I ask. “why
you just got done with evaporation this is condensation!” “Conde-what now!” I reply confused. ”Condensation remember in school we learned that the sun gives us heat and we evaporate then we condense!” “Okay when I’m millions of feet in the air and feel like I’m in school I draw a line.” I joked. But soon me and Frosty started to separate “See you back home!” he calls out a few minutes later I start falling “Weeeeeeeee!” until I see a cliff under me gulp I got my body back and formed a raindrop but I don’t think it matters now!
“Ahhhhhhhhh!”
I scream rather horrified. Im falling to my death like a pebble falling off a
cliff. I keep falling faster and faster. Then I hear a crash, ouch but there’s
no time to complain because Im sliding down the mountain. Bump Bump Bump that’s
all I hear until I close my eyes and pray for a miracle… then I hear a splash.
“Hurray!” Everyone was cherring then I stop and notice… I just survived the
water cycle!
I was so
happy I thought I was going to explode. “We landed in a river!” everyone
cheers. But then I see him his bright eyes and warm smile “Frosty!” “Spark!” we
run to each other and hug but when he tells me we were only a few miles from
home I hugged tighter. Soon after a lot of walking we get home. “MOM!”. “What
happened she asks “It’s a long story I tell her but then I see him, my little
brother tony flying towards the sun “Hi big brother who’s taller now?”
Rain Drop Story
By: Kawika, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
Hi my name is Kawika I am a rain drop starting in
precipitation in Hawaii hey stop pushing me ow no please don’t hit me or
clolid. oow ah ouch that heart where are we Andrew where on the ground now
Kawika stop pushing me now were all in runoff. Andrew yeah runoff is where you
start moving in till you find a river or an ocean hay Kawika we got in a river
cool I. said Andrew yeah Kawika don’t you feel a little hot yeah Kawika do you
think were evaporating yes I do its hot as lava in here.
Andrew yes Kawika
what’s evaporation it is where Kawika you get hot and the sun warms you up and
makes you a gas. Kawika yes Andrew I feel a little different what do you mean I
mean that I feel like I’m disappearing Andrew yes Kawika your Arm is gone. wow
man I’m freaking out help me Kawika now I’m evaporating Andrew don’t leave me
down hear Hu now I’m disappearing cool Andrew do you think. Its a little cold
up hears yeah I feel a little bit I think were in condensation what condensation
Kawika condensation is. Is where you connect to dust particles and make a cloud
that’s what we? Just did to make a cumulus cloud that the end of my story.
A Raindrop Adventure
By: Josalynn, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
“Good Morning!” Ma spoke softly to me this morning.
To me her voice sounded like bubbles in the ocean. Oh, where are my manners?
I’m Makaela Snow. I live in Antanarivo, Madagascar. Antanarivo is on the northeast
coast of Madagascar. I live in a straw house with my mom, dad, and my annoying brother. Well, it’s time for me to go to
the academy. My teacher is Mrs. Raini. I am in the 7th grade. She told us about the water cycle. The
water cycle is the cycle water takes to
become precipitation. These are the 4 stages :
1:
Evaporation
2:
Condensation
3:
Precipitation
4: Runoff
But we are
talking about evaporation. Evaporation
is when tiny droplets
of water rise into the Troposphere. The water drops condense into water vapor. Water vapor is water in a vaporous
form especially when below
boiling temperature and diffused.
Suddenly, I was being lifted
up!!! And I have to admit I was as
scared as a cat is of water . Brrrrr….. It’s c-c-c-c-c-cold rising u-u-u-p into th-th-the atmosphere.. “Hello?” a mysterious voice says awkwardly aloud to
me. The
mysterious voice brung me back to reality. “ Who are you?’’ I ask.
She says “ My name is
Malala.” I tell her my name and ask where we are going. But, she
doesn’t answer. I wonder where she went . AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
“
Malala ?” I yell. “
Where are you?”
I say aloud.. “Makaela! Help me!”
Malala cried. I respond by yelling,
“ What’s wrong Malala?”. “ Where
a-a-a-are you ?” she speaks eerily. I say I’m right nearby and I could use her voice as a guide. Suddenly, I hear a loud high pitch scream
that sounds like………….Malala! “ I’m
hurrying Malala!” I yell unknowingly. I pull Malala into a warm hug.” We must be in the
condensation stage.” She tells me unwary of her surroundings. I say,
“Condensation? Isn’t that when water
runs on the surface?”. She snaps “NO! It is when water clumps around a nucleus
made of dust and other particles in the
trophospere.”Raindrop Story
By: Jaedyn, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
Have you ever fallen
from the sky before? Because I have
and it hurts
worse than being
hit than a
fast moving train. My name is Jaedyn by the way. Let me
tell you the
time I fell
from the sky
and learned the water
cycle. This is my story.
Imagine me living in
the Bahamas on a mountain. This
happened right before
the annual sliding
festival, chosen members
of our civilization
slide down our
mountain into the
great pond. My friend
Gary says the
“scientifical” name for it
is runoff. “It’s the movement of water droplets
sliding downward after precipitation “he mocks. Gary and I were playing
baseball on top
of the mountain
when I hit a homerun
and the ball
rolled down the
hill. I went to
go get the
ball but I ended
up falling into
the pond with
no way out. “I
just fell into
the great pond, I
just became part
of the festival, I’m
now called runoff!
Over my
panicking I couldn’t
hear a word
except Gary yelling
at me from
the side-lines “Are you
ok?” Which I soon
realized that he
is right there
beside me.”Why did you jump in?
“I stammered “You’re not getting evaporated without me.” “Evapa-whated?’ I
stammered, You know nothing
about the water cycle
do you, have you
been sleeping in
class again? “That’s beside the
point now what evaporation is.” It’s
were the sun
heats up the
surface of the
water and it evaporates,
dud” he told “And once
that’s done-“ “boooooring”I moaned. Hey
dude what’s happening I
feel like I’m
being barbecued. Gary… where did
the ground go, after
my words I
feel faint. The
last thing I
remember seeing is
Gary flailing his
arms then…darkness.
Wake up sandman, you
have to see this! I pry my
eyes open to
see Gary standing
over me yelling
again. “Wake up” I’m up, I’m
up are we
still flying? Yeah why, if
you faint again
I’ll push you
down so hard
that you’ll probably
splat onto my house!
“Don’t you touch me get away” I yelped “I was joking. “He explained “Stay five
feet away from me! “I shrieked “Exactly where are we going again? “I asked
if you’d listen
to me you
would know. Prepare to get bashed
and bruised because
when we become
a cloud all
the water –droplets, that’s us
are now get
stuck to each other
and become a
cloud(without them knowing
they were stuffed
into clouds during
their conversation)dude, I’m getting
really cold… why can’t
I move. Then we started to drift
down “who’s a pretty snowflake? You are, yes you are.” He mocked “Gary what’s
happening to us? Now I know you’ve been sleeping in class.” Where now
in precipitation, the water
droplets have now
turned into four
different stages. Rain, sleet,
snow or
hail then once
we fall to earth
and become runoff, transpiration or-“ Then Gary
was gone again!”
Raindrop Story
By: Emilee, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
Hi I’m Phoebe, and I’m a raindrop. I’m sitting on a
nice, fluffy cloud above Hawaii in the sunshine. The sunshine is as bright as a
flashlight. My friend Freddy says “I’m so excited for the big wiki teki
celebration tonight!” I respond “I’m excited
too!” “I hope they do the flames throwing this year.” Then out of
nowhere “AHH” I hear everyone screaming and I notice we’re falling out if the
sky.
“SLAT” I hit the ground. I heard people moaning and groaning. I looked around and noticed Freddy was no longer. “curse precipitation” I yelled in case you didn’t know is its another word for rain fall that’s all. There are four different forms of precipitation rain, sleet, snow and hail. Now I start to look around again. Then out of nowhere I hear someone say “ over here hey help “ and I look but don’t see anyone so I just let it go. I hear the voice again and I notice its Freddy and he is fine. And we lay on the ground for about a week. One day out of the week as night was coming upon us we noticed that we were the only raindrop and what if nobody survived me and Freddy looked at each other and both said at the same time “ we are so lucky” and then we laughed “hahaha. Me and Freddy got tired and went to sleep. That next morning we started walking to find a place to stay.
After walking for about a week later me and Freddy were just laying out of nowhere a heavy wind started to blow and it blew me and Freddy away. “whoa”I heard Freddy moaning. I looked around and I saw Freddy blowing in a different direction then me. After a while the wind stopped and I became night time and I gew exhausted.
“SLAT” I hit the ground. I heard people moaning and groaning. I looked around and noticed Freddy was no longer. “curse precipitation” I yelled in case you didn’t know is its another word for rain fall that’s all. There are four different forms of precipitation rain, sleet, snow and hail. Now I start to look around again. Then out of nowhere I hear someone say “ over here hey help “ and I look but don’t see anyone so I just let it go. I hear the voice again and I notice its Freddy and he is fine. And we lay on the ground for about a week. One day out of the week as night was coming upon us we noticed that we were the only raindrop and what if nobody survived me and Freddy looked at each other and both said at the same time “ we are so lucky” and then we laughed “hahaha. Me and Freddy got tired and went to sleep. That next morning we started walking to find a place to stay.
After walking for about a week later me and Freddy were just laying out of nowhere a heavy wind started to blow and it blew me and Freddy away. “whoa”I heard Freddy moaning. I looked around and I saw Freddy blowing in a different direction then me. After a while the wind stopped and I became night time and I gew exhausted.
Raindrop
By: Alma, Mrs. Seely's 5th Grade Class
SPLAT!
I hit the ground hard, or at least I think it’s the ground. I’ve felt the
ground before, and it feels nothing like this. The ground feels rocky, like a
rocky planet. Now this feels like a smooth glass window. I guess the girl
beside me saw the confused and scared look on my face because she said “Its ok,
we’re just in a glass tube called a rain gauge” .I thought to myself for a
moment. In my mind I say, well I hope she is right. Then I think, hey she looks
pretty nice. I wonder what her name is. Then I ask “What’s your name?” “My name
is Bethany but you can call me Beth” she replies. “Hey do you know what’s going
on?” I ask. “Yes, we were just
precipitating” says Beth. I start to look around, but all of a sudden Beth and
I were pulled up and out of the rain gauge. Then I hit the ground and I’m out
like a nightlight.
I wake up to Beth shaking me awake. And I’m in some sort of hallway. It’s really tall and wide. I look around and I notice it’s not raining people anymore. Instead people are floating down the hallway and into a big room I try to see inside the big room but Beth calls me and I don’t get a chance see inside. She starts to swim over to me and while she’s coming toward me she shouts “hey u never told me you name!” I start to say “oh my name, my name is…..”I stopped speaking when all of a sudden I watched in horror as Beth was forcefully pulled into the big room and then, before she completely went in the room, she screamed for me to help her but I just stayed frozen in my spot. I wanted to help her but my molecules would not move. I hear her call for help, then, she's gone. ”I hope I will see her again” I say to myself but before I knew it I was pulled in too.
I look around the corner and there, at the top, I see Beth looking around for me. I swim up to her and tell her hi.” My goodness, you scared me!” Beth says. The next thing that happens scares me. Beth starts to turn into little molecules and she floats up and out of the water and onto the air. Then I am lifted into the air also. I get scared for a second but Beth tells me it will be okay. So I feel a little better.
I wake up to Beth shaking me awake. And I’m in some sort of hallway. It’s really tall and wide. I look around and I notice it’s not raining people anymore. Instead people are floating down the hallway and into a big room I try to see inside the big room but Beth calls me and I don’t get a chance see inside. She starts to swim over to me and while she’s coming toward me she shouts “hey u never told me you name!” I start to say “oh my name, my name is…..”I stopped speaking when all of a sudden I watched in horror as Beth was forcefully pulled into the big room and then, before she completely went in the room, she screamed for me to help her but I just stayed frozen in my spot. I wanted to help her but my molecules would not move. I hear her call for help, then, she's gone. ”I hope I will see her again” I say to myself but before I knew it I was pulled in too.
I look around the corner and there, at the top, I see Beth looking around for me. I swim up to her and tell her hi.” My goodness, you scared me!” Beth says. The next thing that happens scares me. Beth starts to turn into little molecules and she floats up and out of the water and onto the air. Then I am lifted into the air also. I get scared for a second but Beth tells me it will be okay. So I feel a little better.
Fall
By: Megan, Mrs. Reid's 3rd Grade Class
There are four seasons in a year. I am going to tell you about fall. There is colder weather, many holidays, and
sports. There are holidays in fall
Halloween, Columbus Day, and Thanksgiving.
My mom’s birthday is on October the 29th, Veterans Day is
celebrated in September. There are
festivals celebrated in fall like the Mullet Festival, there are also hayrides
like the haunted hayride and just fun hayrides, trick-or-treating or
trunk-or-treating is where there is a tree trunk with candy under it and people
are in costumes at church but not scary costumes. There are evening parties, evening school
festivals. The Mullet Festival is where
there are a lot of floats.
In fall we
have food and drinks. These are some of
the drinks and foods: apple cider, turkey, and pumpkin pie. On Thanksgiving we also have a feast; we have
coleslaw, potato salad, eggs, Jello with fruit, and beans. Then we have desserts like chocolate
cake. Then we all go home. Then we all are sleepy.
Now I am
going to tell you about weather. In the fall
season there are different weather changes. When it is colder you have to wear
warm clothes like jackets and long sleeve shirts and jeans. You also can jump
in leaves once you rake them. I also make hot cocoa because it’s getting
colder. There’s also days that are warm and not warm. This fall we saw the Lunar Eclipse. My
favorite thing about the Lunar Eclipse is that it is pretty. Some people get
sick because it gets cold.
Lastly,
some things we do in the fall are celebrate all sorts of holidays and
festivals. There are many types of things in different holiday festivals all
over the world for different seasons. People do things differently for fall
than us. Their weather is different. I don’t know what other countries do to
celebrate fall but people celebrate in different ways.
Fall
By: Riley, Mrs. Reid's 3rd Grade Class
There are
four seasons in a year. I am going to
tell you about fall. There is colder
weather many holidays and sports. There
are many things I like about the fall.
The weather gets colder so we to wear warm clothes. The leaves fall off the trees and I rake them
up and jump in them.
There are many holidays in
fall. My favorites are the decorations,
candy, and food, last but not least are the festivities. My favorite is the school festival, it is
always fun. In fall there are many kinds
of food is a turkey. One kind of food
and drinks are turkey, corn and other kinds of Thanksgiving foods. My favorite kinds of drinks are Thanksgiving
drinks. For food my mom cooks a nice big
fat turkey every year. Apple cider is
our Thanksgiving drink almost every year.
In fall there are many
holidays. There are holidays like
Halloween, Veterans Day, Thanksgiving, and birthdays. There is even Columbus Day and the lunar
eclipse. The lunar eclipse is on October
8, Thanksgiving is November 27, and Veterans Day is November 11. There are a lot of people on Thanksgiving,
Halloween, and at birthdays. Friends and
family come over to my house for Thanksgiving.
Fall
By: Keegan, Mrs. Reid's 3rd Grade Class
There are
four seasons in a year. I am going to tell you about the fall season. There is
colder weather, many holidays and festivals, as well as different kinds of
foods and drinks.
In fall
there are a lot of festivals. Here are some of them. There are church festivals
and school festivals around Halloween time.
The Mullet Festival is also in the fall. We trick-or-treat and
trunk-or-treat to celebrate Halloween. There are many hayrides to go on. We
wear costumes. Those are some of the fall festivals.
Weather in
October starts to get cold. You should wear warm clothes. The leaves start to
fall and grass starts to die. I like to rake leaves into a pile and them jump
into them. In October a lot of animals start to hibernate because it gets cold.
People also stop hunting and kids stopping playing outside as much. It gets so
cold it can frost in October.
In fall
there are a lot of holidays. Some are in the beginning of the season like
Veterans Day and the Lunar Eclipse. Other holidays are in the middle like
Columbus Day and Halloween. There is also the holiday of Thanksgiving. There
are many holidays in the fall.
In fall
there are a lot of foods and drinks that people have. They can be different
from other seasons. Here are some of the foods and drinks. There is turkey,
pumpkin pie, candy and others. Some eat ham and apple pie. All of those things
together can make a feast. Now you know
some more about fall.
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